My Body Broken: Poetic Reflections for Holy Week (part 1)
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- Mar 18, 2024
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I had never thought of it like that before. I had long treasured the story of Holy Week but had never before conceived the significance of juxtaposing the events of the week with Jesus' own words prior.
I wrote this poem as a script to be read aloud by two alternating voices. Consider reading it at your church's upcoming Good Friday service, out loud at a small group gathering during guided reflection, or pondering it alone with your journal.
I pray you are as deeply moved as I was in reflecting upon the story in this creative light.
✍🏽 The City Shook
Esther Yoder
Narrator | Jesus |
The city shook as Jesus entered Jerusalem that day. “Hosanna” they shouted, revering the Ruler’s arrival. But the Son of David saw through the short-lived praise. | |
“O Jerusalem, Jerusalem,” | |
The Wonderful Counselor wept. | |
“The city that kills the prophets sent to it,” | |
His heart turned tender within Him as He took in the sight of the territory He treasured. | |
“How often I would have gathered you,” | |
He longingly offered up His lament. | |
“But you were not willing.” | |
Days passed and the time came to gather the twelve around the table, the traitor and the true together. | |
“Earnestly have I desired to share this meal with you,” | |
The Everlasting One expressed, knowing full well the events about to ensue. Then, gathering the group, He guided them to the Garden of Gethsemane. | |
“Watch and pray with me,” | |
He supplicated; His soul sorrowful unto death. | |
“If it be possible, I pray this cup pass from me,” | |
Christ cried out for consolation. | |
“Yet not as I will but as You will,” | |
He courageously confirmed His commitment to the cross. Stressed and strained, the Savior sweat blood while stating His single pursuit. | |
“Father, glorify Your Name.” | |
Suddenly, the stillness of the night was severed by swords and shouts. | |
“My betrayer is at hand.” | |
And just like that, the Good Shepherd was greeted with a kiss and given over to the guards. Profound pain pierced the Prince of Peace as He looked upon the person performing such an act of betrayal. | |
“Friend, do what you came to do,” | |
Said the Lamb, locking eyes with one He loved. He called him friend. (Pause) In a matter of moments, a murderer is released; the Messiah condemned. Betrayed, beaten, and bound. | |
“This is my body, broken for you.” | |
Stripped, scourged, and shamed. | |
“For their sake, I consecrate Myself.” | |
Scoffed at, spit on, slapped, and struck with a reed. | |
“As I have loved you so you ought to love one another.” | |
Falsely accused, flogged, forsaken, and forced to carry His cross. | |
“Father forgive them.” | |
Disowned, dismissed, and despised. | |
“My desire is that they would be one just as we are one.” | |
Declared guilty and delivered over to death. | |
“For this purpose, I have come to this hour.” | |
“Away with this man!” “Crucify Him!” “What evil has He done?” “Crucify Him!” | |
“No one takes my life from me, but I lay it down.” | |
Nailed to a cross and mockingly hailed as King of the Jews. | |
“When I am lifted up, I will draw all men to myself.” | |
Categorized with criminals, the Creator hung there on a cross. | |
“Today you will be with Me in Paradise.” | |
Then, with head bowed and spirit surrendered, | |
“Father, into Your hands I commit My spirit.” | |
The city shook that hour as the Giver of Life gave up His life. The temple curtain tore in two. | |
“It is finished,” | |
The expression echoed into the expanse. The Living Cornerstone laid lifeless behind a stone. But not for long. For the city shook one final time that morning the Savior rose from the dead. His resurrected life repeats the truth, | |
“Because I live, you also shall live.” |
*Note: References to the city shaking can be found in
Matthew 21:10 (The Triumphal Entry)
Matthew 27:50-51 (The Crucifixion)
Matthew 28:1-2 (The Resurrection)
Be sure to check back next Monday for Part Two of our mini-series: Poetic Reflections on Holy Week. In next week's entry, I'll share vulnerably about my struggle to comprehend the love of God and the poem that finally broke me.
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He is so worthy of my all. Because HE LIVES I can face today and my tomorrows.
Jesus is my PEACE!